Many, many years ago – decades, in fact – I found myself
spending a few days on a holiday in Sarawak. We had signed up with a company
that took you up river from Kuching, then a really small town, to visit the
famous longhouses. Here we met the indigenous Dyak people who, not that long
ago, had been headhunters and many of whom still lived on the most basic slash
and burn cultivation and the food they could catch in the jungle. We even caught
a tiny mouse deer ourselves and contributed it to the collective pot. It was a
magical few days and almost certainly unrepeatable, for the last couple of
decades have seen logging destroy much of the habitat the Dyaks rely on to live,
while mass tourism means that trips like those we made then are probably by now
impossible.
It was on that trip that I first came across James Brooke.
The museum in Kuching had an exhibition of Sarawak's history with a large
display on 'The White Rajahs' next to a much smaller display on 'The Colonial
Era'. I was confused. The White Rajahs were clearly, well, white. Why was it
that while the tone of 'The Colonial Era' was rather disapproving (it mainly
seems to have consisted of killing the Governor), 'The White Rajahs' display
hinted at a Golden Age?
The answer seems to have been the extraordinary relationship
the first White Rajah, James Brooke, had with the people of Sarawak. Sarawak
then was a province of a much bigger country ruled by Muda Hassim in Brunei.
Hassim gave the rule of Sarawak to James Brooke as a reward for Brooke's help
suppressing a rebellion there. Brooke insisted that Sarawak was not part
of the British Empire and he set out to rule as an enlightened despot.
At the centre of the exhibition was a portrait of James
Brooke. It was a copy of the one in London's National Portrait Gallery, which
I've used for the book cover. I saw it and just wanted to know more about this
astonishingly handsome, dashing man who had taken a tiny country halfway round
the globe from his home and made it his own. When I got back to England I
started to read all I could find about him. It wasn't that difficult. His
diaries were published, as were those of Keppel, the admiral who helps him
defeat the pirates. I found myself getting more and more caught up in his story
and, because I had always wanted to write, I decided to turn it into a novel.
What I aimed for was an old-fashioned yarn with an old-fashioned hero and, up to
a point, I succeeded. But in the end, although it got representation by a
well-known agent, it really wasn't good enough for publication. I put it away
and forgot about it.
Years passed and I found myself writing lots of non-fiction,
often anonymously. I decided that I owed it to myself to write the novel I've
always planned for. We were moving into an age when Western armies were invading
remote countries, often with noble intentions but sometimes with terrible
consequences. I wanted to write about how good people could end up involved in
questionable wars and horrifying massacres. I remembered that James Brooke had
himself been involved in a massacre which, at the time, had horrified liberal
opinion in Britain and resulted in a Commission of Inquiry in Singapore. I
decided to go back to my original novel and rewrite it as a much darker piece
with a flawed hero.
I wanted to get close to Brooke as a man, rather than just as
a historical figure, and I thought this could best be done through the eyes of
someone who knew him and shared his experiences. I tried to think who this could
be and came to the idea that the story could be told from the point of view of a
sailor on his ship, the Royalist. And that was how John Williamson came
into being. Unlike Brooke, who is very closely based on the historical figure,
Williamson is almost entirely fictional. The real James Brooke had an
interpreter called John Williamson and I just borrowed the name. (The real
Williamson was half-Malay and died quite early on.)
Once Williamson came into the story, his role just grew. He had started out as a narrative device but, as time went by, he became central to the story. Partly, I think, this is because everything was seen through his eyes and so I found myself thinking more and more about how he felt about things and partly because I tried to use Williamson as a figure who reflected Brooke's relationship with the Dyaks. So Brooke 'educates' him but at the same time Williamson finds that the relationship stops him developing fully as his own man. By now, what had started as a historical novel with a bit of romance became much more a romance set in a historical story.
Once Williamson came into the story, his role just grew. He had started out as a narrative device but, as time went by, he became central to the story. Partly, I think, this is because everything was seen through his eyes and so I found myself thinking more and more about how he felt about things and partly because I tried to use Williamson as a figure who reflected Brooke's relationship with the Dyaks. So Brooke 'educates' him but at the same time Williamson finds that the relationship stops him developing fully as his own man. By now, what had started as a historical novel with a bit of romance became much more a romance set in a historical story.
The whole 'gay' bit never seemed that important. The real
Brooke was almost certainly gay, all the characters around him were men: if he
was going to have a relationship, it was always going to be a gay
relationship.
The book was agented and shown to four major publishers all of whom rejected it, saying it was too "difficult" for a first novel. I was left with the definite impression that if Brooke had a female lover, it would have made the book massively easier to sell. I'm not saying that the homosexuality was a deal-breaker and that it would have been sold otherwise, but I am pretty certain it was a definite problem as far as marketing went. So I sent it to an independent publisher who does a lot of gay books (JMS Books) and it was accepted straight away.
The book was agented and shown to four major publishers all of whom rejected it, saying it was too "difficult" for a first novel. I was left with the definite impression that if Brooke had a female lover, it would have made the book massively easier to sell. I'm not saying that the homosexuality was a deal-breaker and that it would have been sold otherwise, but I am pretty certain it was a definite problem as far as marketing went. So I sent it to an independent publisher who does a lot of gay books (JMS Books) and it was accepted straight away.
3 comments:
This sounds *fascinating* -- I need to get my hands on this book, stat. That it was rejected as being too "difficult" for a first novel is a plus in my book!
I find this book's history really interesting, and I especially love it that you were able to take such an extraordinary trip, all those years ago, and that's what got the idea started for you. "Difficult" is in the eye of the beholder, I guess. It's nice to see such an unusual setting and background, too.
Thanks for these thoughts. I hope the book lives up to your expectations.
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